2008 Ocia-Trinovantium Summit

[Michael Dervin OCS]

What was meant by that part of the treaty, was the the Ocian Governemt could develop the Garrison, by building extra runways and links to Southern Dalmantia as it saw apt and fit. But given a re-read of the sentance, I can see where you are coming from, as it isn't clear cut what that section means and thus can cause a bit of ambiguity in relation to that section of the treaty.

Thus, I am proposing to amend Article VI to read as follows:

The Ocian Federation shall maintain the right to operate a small garrison, within the boundaries set by this treaty. of troops with an runway for aerial links with Southern Dalmantia and any future developments and additions which is seen fit and apt by the Ocian Government in relation to this Garrison. There shall be free passage, without hindrance of any kind, of any Military Personnel, Military Vehicles, Military Ships and Military Aircraft, under the command of the Ocian Federation, in and out of the Garrison.

In removing & adding the above text, I am proposing to Keep the Small Garrison, but not restricting the needed development in the Garrison as time goes on. This will not allow the Garrison to expand outside its current boundaries and thus there will be no threat of a expanding garrison or a increase in the garrison size or force, unless of course in Wartime or the event of this treaty being breached.

I hope this addresses your concerns,

[tywysydd]

This, your excellency has addressed my concerns and i am now prepared to sign the document on behalf of the people of Trinovantium.

[Michael Dervin OCS]

Your Excellency,

The Ocian Federation, is happy with this Treaty (as Amended), and is now prepared to sign.

[Michael Dervin OCS]

Just one small issue, before we sign, what will the boundaries of this Garrison?

[Michael Dervin OCS]

The Amended Treaty:

The Directrus Accord

Preamble

WHEREAS the Ocian Federation and the Federal Republic of Trinovantium are both in agreement that the lands informally known as “Northern Dalmantia” should appropriately transfer the sovereignty from the Ocian Federation to the Federal Republic of Trinovantium under Special Provisions.

RECOGNIZING these facts under this treaty which henceforth Will be known as the “Directrus Accord” these lands will be transferred.

Article I

The Land Informally Known as “Northern Dalmantia” shall not retain this name when it joins the Federal Republic of Trinovantium, and shall bare no official affiliation with the actual Dalmantia. The Federal Republic of Trinovantium, may rename the area, as they see fit and apt.

Article II

This Treaty Shall guarantee special rights for Ocian Citizens living in “Northern Dalmantia”, insofar that they should be treated equally, with the same rights and entitlements, without any discrimination or prejudice, as Trinovantic would, and will have.

Article III

The Transfer of sovereignty will only be considered legitimate if the terms are met. The Terms shall be:

a) The Area shall govern itself, and maintain the right of self determination.

b) The Area shall be guaranteed the right to pass it’s own laws

c) The Citizens of “North Dalmantia” shall be guaranteed safe passage should they decide to emigrate to Ocia. No Citizen of “North Dalmantia”, shall be forced to or intimidated or made against his/her own free will, by Act of Law or otherwise, to move from “North Dalmantia” to the Ocian Federation or to any other Nation, State, Province or Region.


d) North Dalmantia shall practice a “One Nation, two system’s” doctrine and shall fully adapt the judicial law of the Ocian Federation into common practice for the region.

e) A monument to fallen Ocian Soldiers must be erected and maintained with full dignity and honour.

f) All fallen war dead shall be treated with the utmost respect, and the graves which they lay must be respected.

g) The cultural integrity of the ethnic Ocians in the area must be preserved through a Trinovantic government funded program.

h) The so called “Demilitarized Zone or ‘DMZ’ must be completely dismantled.

i) Race, ethnicity, religion, language, or any other diversity within this new territory will be respected, and thus all citizens living in this region will all be granted equal status.

Article IV

Any breech of these terms is considered a serious offence against this treaty and will automatically instate the transfer of illegitimate.

Article VI

The Ocian Federation shall maintain the right to operate a small garrison within the boundaries set by this treaty. There shall be free passage, without hindrance of any kind, of any Military Personnel, Military Vehicles, Military Ships and Military Aircraft, under the command of the Ocian Federation, in and out of the Garrison.


Article VII

The Hand over shall take affect on June 20^th, 2008.

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This Treaty is Therefore Signed into effect this day _______________ by the signatories

For the Ocian Federation:
_____________________

For the Federal Republic of Trinovantium:
__________________________________

[tywysydd]

Jun 18, 2008 10:35:45 GMT -4 Michael Dervin OCS said:

The Amended Treaty:

The Directrus Accord

Preamble

WHEREAS the Ocian Federation and the Federal Republic of Trinovantium are both in agreement that the lands informally known as “Northern Dalmantia” should appropriately transfer the sovereignty from the Ocian Federation to the Federal Republic of Trinovantium under Special Provisions.

RECOGNIZING these facts under this treaty which henceforth Will be known as the “Directrus Accord” these lands will be transferred.

Article I

The Land Informally Known as “Northern Dalmantia” shall not retain this name when it joins the Federal Republic of Trinovantium, and shall bare no official affiliation with the actual Dalmantia. The Federal Republic of Trinovantium, may rename the area, as they see fit and apt.

Article II

This Treaty Shall guarantee special rights for Ocian Citizens living in “Northern Dalmantia”, insofar that they should be treated equally, with the same rights and entitlements, without any discrimination or prejudice, as Trinovantic would, and will have.

Article III

The Transfer of sovereignty will only be considered legitimate if the terms are met. The Terms shall be:

a) The Area shall govern itself, and maintain the right of self determination.

b) The Area shall be guaranteed the right to pass it’s own laws

c) The Citizens of “North Dalmantia” shall be guaranteed safe passage should they decide to emigrate to Ocia. No Citizen of “North Dalmantia”, shall be forced to or intimidated or made against his/her own free will, by Act of Law or otherwise, to move from “North Dalmantia” to the Ocian Federation or to any other Nation, State, Province or Region.


d) North Dalmantia shall practice a “One Nation, two system’s” doctrine and shall fully adapt the judicial law of the Ocian Federation into common practice for the region.

e) A monument to fallen Ocian Soldiers must be erected and maintained with full dignity and honour.

f) All fallen war dead shall be treated with the utmost respect, and the graves which they lay must be respected.

g) The cultural integrity of the ethnic Ocians in the area must be preserved through a Trinovantic government funded program.

h) The so called “Demilitarized Zone or ‘DMZ’ must be completely dismantled.

i) Race, ethnicity, religion, language, or any other diversity within this new territory will be respected, and thus all citizens living in this region will all be granted equal status.

Article IV

Any breech of these terms is considered a serious offence against this treaty and will automatically instate the transfer of illegitimate.

Article VI

The Ocian Federation shall maintain the right to operate a small garrison within the boundaries set by this treaty. There shall be free passage, without hindrance of any kind, of any Military Personnel, Military Vehicles, Military Ships and Military Aircraft, under the command of the Ocian Federation, in and out of the Garrison.


Article VII

The Hand over shall take affect on June 20^th, 2008.

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This Treaty is Therefore Signed into effect this day _______________ by the signatories

For the Ocian Federation:
_____________________

For the Federal Republic of Trinovantium:



The Grand Chancellor the Tywysydd, Chief Matugenus, Chieftain of the Trinovantii

[Michael Dervin OCS]

The Directrus Accord

Preamble

WHEREAS the Ocian Federation and the Federal Republic of Trinovantium are both in agreement that the lands informally known as “Northern Dalmantia” should appropriately transfer the sovereignty from the Ocian Federation to the Federal Republic of Trinovantium under Special Provisions.

RECOGNIZING these facts under this treaty which henceforth Will be known as the “Directrus Accord” these lands will be transferred.

Article I

The Land Informally Known as “Northern Dalmantia” shall not retain this name when it joins the Federal Republic of Trinovantium, and shall bare no official affiliation with the actual Dalmantia. The Federal Republic of Trinovantium, may rename the area, as they see fit and apt.

Article II

This Treaty Shall guarantee special rights for Ocian Citizens living in “Northern Dalmantia”, insofar that they should be treated equally, with the same rights and entitlements, without any discrimination or prejudice, as Trinovantic would, and will have.

Article III

The Transfer of sovereignty will only be considered legitimate if the terms are met. The Terms shall be:

a) The Area shall govern itself, and maintain the right of self determination.

b) The Area shall be guaranteed the right to pass it’s own laws

c) The Citizens of “North Dalmantia” shall be guaranteed safe passage should they decide to emigrate to Ocia. No Citizen of “North Dalmantia”, shall be forced to or intimidated or made against his/her own free will, by Act of Law or otherwise, to move from “North Dalmantia” to the Ocian Federation or to any other Nation, State, Province or Region.


d) North Dalmantia shall practice a “One Nation, two system’s” doctrine and shall fully adapt the judicial law of the Ocian Federation into common practice for the region.

e) A monument to fallen Ocian Soldiers must be erected and maintained with full dignity and honour.

f) All fallen war dead shall be treated with the utmost respect, and the graves which they lay must be respected.

g) The cultural integrity of the ethnic Ocians in the area must be preserved through a Trinovantic government funded program.

h) The so called “Demilitarized Zone or ‘DMZ’ must be completely dismantled.

i) Race, ethnicity, religion, language, or any other diversity within this new territory will be respected, and thus all citizens living in this region will all be granted equal status.

Article IV

Any breech of these terms is considered a serious offence against this treaty and will automatically instate the transfer as illegitimate.

Article VI

The Ocian Federation shall maintain the right to operate a small garrison within the boundaries set by this treaty. There shall be free passage, without hindrance of any kind, of any Military Personnel, Military Vehicles, Military Ships and Military Aircraft, under the command of the Ocian Federation, in and out of the Garrison.


Article VII

The Hand over shall take affect on June 20^th, 2008.

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This Treaty is Therefore Signed into effect this day 18^th of June, in the Year 2008 AD by the signatories

For the Ocian Federation:

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Michael Dervin OCS
President of the Ocian Federation

For the Federal Republic of Trinovantium:



The Grand Chancellor the Tywysydd, Chief Matugenus, Chieftain of the Trinovantii



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EDIT: Grammar/Spelling Error: “of illegitimate” was changed to “as illegitimate”

[tywysydd]

LONG LIVE OCIA!

LONG LIVE TRINOVANTIUM!

(P.S how did you make your signature? my crudely paint drawn one needs an update)

[Michael Dervin OCS]

Indeed, LONG LIVE TRINOVANTIUM!

LONG LIVE OCIA!


(I used this website: www.mylivesignature.com/mls_wizard1_1.php Just type in your name and it gives you loads of different fonts (around 100, I believe), then pick the one you like and follow the wizard instructions, it will then give you a link in BB Code at the end which you can use on the forums)

[tywysydd]

thanks!

[Michael Dervin OCS]

Is a Admin going to delete the Spam here?